Magazine Magazine: My Flat Plan Feedback

           
            

This is some feedback that I had got for my flat plans. From this it has given me a couple ideas on how to improve and make my magazine better and more suitable for my target audience. From the feedback that I was given  I was told that I should maybe change the masthead of my magazine to suit my magazine more to which I totally agree as I was never that keen on it. I was also told that the Artist name and pull quote should be a lot bigger as to which I also agree on. I was planning to do that when it had come to actually start on the production of magazine. I had also got feedback that  should add more pictures to my contents page.